our writeing

3 thoughts on “our writeing

  1. I like your pictures was it hard to draw ? The timer goes rery quickly maybe you could practise your drawing finst.

  2. Hello Bryan, I like your story and I also like the part where you found a tree with a door and a lantern,it also reminds me of when my family and I went to check if the car was ok we were in the middle of the forest driving through the forest to check if the BMW was ok. I like the ending part. What happens next? Does a monster come out? Or does the owner of the tree come out? I don’t know what will happen next.

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